Writing: Introduction: Hi, my name is Alba I'm fourteen years old and now I'm going to talk about my last summer. First I'm talking about Malgrat de mar and finish I'm talking about Banyoles. Malgrat de Mar: In August I went for 4 days with my family in Malgrat de Mar. I went to the beach and the swimming pool every day and I went to walking on the thematic park. Banyoles: The rest of the summer I stayed in Banyoles with my friends. On 5,6 and 7 of July I went to Championships of Spain in Banyoles. The competition was with four persons each boat. On 7 of July, the last day, there were the end competition and we stayed a third place. The podium was made up of eight girl from Banyoles and four from Tortosa. And the rest of July and August stay with my friends. Finish, in September I started training and school. Power Point:
Hello my name is Alba I'm 13 years old and today I'm talking about my last summer.
First I'm going to talk about Andorra, second I'm going to talk about Eivissa and finally I'm
going to talk about
Eivissa and finally I'm going to talk about Banyoles.
On
17th of July I went to Andorra with my parents, my brother
and my cousins for 5 days. In Andorra I went shopping, in the
swimming pool of the hotel I and on the excursions in the mountain...
It was fun.
On
22nd of July I came back it's my house.
Then
I went to Eivissa. On the 5th of Setember I went for 5 days it's
Eivissa with my parents and my brother. We went to my father's work.
We got up at half past 5 to the morning and I went to Girona in the
airport. In 9 o'clock we get to Eivissa and I went to the rent a car
and I went to the hotel. In Eivissa I went to the diferents caves.
In
the one cove called “Cove Compta” I was a jellyfish sting in the
legs it was horrible I also in “Cove Es Figueral” with the
friends of my father. And we eat rice very good and my favorite cove
is “Cove Tarida”.
I
went to one days in the center of Eivissa and I saw to the harbor
some spectacular boats, also clubs, shops... . I also went to the
small a aquarium.
I
also went to the hippy market “Dalies”.
And
finally in Banyoles the other part of the summer. I was in Banyoles
with my friends Elsa and Laia. Corpse in the afternoon in the “Club”
playing the carts, swim... and the other days would in Laia's
house...
This
summer has been fantastic.
Thanks for your attention. Power Point:
MY CLASSMATES: Oriol: He went to Andorra, act in diferent magical events and the lasts days he stayed in Banyoles with his friends. Sergi: He went to the Basketball Camp and in Sant Antoni de Calonge in the beach. Lidia: She went to Young Life's Camp, in Vilanova i la Geltrú and in Camprodon. Laia: She went to Sevilla, in Camprodon, in Amella de Mar and in Salou (Portaventura) and the other part of the summer I stay in Banyoles. Anna: She went to Llaveneres, in Plymouth, in Scothlan, in Llafranc, Amy the Scotland in in the other part of the summer I stay in Banyoles. Mateu: He went to the beach and stay in Banyoles. Paula: She went to Palamos and in Banyoles. Enric: She went to París and in Banyoles. Eva: She went to Netherland and in Camprodon. OBSERVATIONS: Presentation: Did you use any resources? Yes I use the power point. Were the resources relevant attractives? Yes the power point. Did you show / talk about the photos to the audience? Yes, I talk about the photos. Body Language and Eye Contact: Did you look at your audience most of the time? Yes Did you read from your notes? Yes Did you do any gestures/movement to hold the attention of your audience? Yes I describe the photos Structure: Did you organize your ideas in order of importance? Yes Did you use discourse markers to make your ideas more clear? Which ones? Yes. First, Second and Finally.
Content: Did you introduce interessting information to your audience? Yes Did you look up information/facts/ideas in the inernet/ books...? Yes, Ideas in the Internet Was your infomation more superfical or more detailed and original? Yes Language: Did you check your grammar? Yes Did you use rich/new vocabulary looking up the dictionary? No Did you use sentence linkers? Yes Did you use fillers? Yes Pronounciation & Intonation: Did you know how to pronouce all your words? Did you check the pronounciation with a dictionary, a classmate or the teacher? No. Yes. Did you change your tone of voice or use a monotone all the time? Did you speed in a fluid continuum or with breaks and interruptions? No. No. Self-Evaluation: You are your teacher! What mark did you get? 6 ;-)
